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委培年快完了……哭……

 
 
 

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想了很久,还是用了这篇文章。首先因为是自己写的,好背;其次是因为主题是HP,大家熟悉有共鸣;再者是……嘻嘻,晒命性质,这篇是我最满意的文章之一了~~(相信大家有这个表情

这里把文章展示一下,可能很多人都已经看过了,但是因为有点改动,所以希望各位看官提点改进意见。单词方面应该不难,相信大家都可以顺利看下来。

多谢各位先啦!

现在把改完的文章也贴出来,摆脱大家帮忙指导一下~~另外,这个topic不会冷场吧?……

                                                 Forever, My Beloved Half-Blood Prince

 

Good afternoon, teachers. I bet we gather here because we all love English. Then u must know the series Harry Potter. Having finished the whole series ,now I’ve got the chance to share my feelings.

 

I feel so sorry that Mrs. Rowling has killed almost all my favorite characters in the final book, seemingly totally without consideration. First Hedwig, second mad-eye, then the others... and at last came to the very important dark star: Severus Snape.

    So long have people been announcing their opinions that Severus has got to be a good guy, a spy on Voldemort for Dumbledore, a great super hero. Well, as far as i'm concerned, although when facing his love for Lily, he appeared to be a coward, still he is, in my deep heart, a true man!

   Besides him, nobody else could have possibly born the torture of leaving his beloved girl to an arrogant James; nobody else could have possibly dared to confess his darkness to a boy, Harry, who he hates most; nobody else could have possibly sacrificed his entire life to fight against the Dark Lord.

    All the above proves that Severus is the real hero!!! As the last Horcruxe is destroyed, the Dark Lord has to face his end, which could not have been gained without the efforts of the great prince!!!

    Severus has gone forever, but not along with all the respects we hold for him. Together with him, Lupin, Tonks, Fred, Robby and a lot other warriors all pass away in order to win the final triumph. And they succeed!!!

    With Harry seeing off little James, Lily and Albus Severus at the nine and three quarters, the legend comes to its end. But we shall never forget there was once a determined and courageous man, who devoted all his life to fighting for a bright future, who kept his life-long love for Lily, who will go down to the magical history with eternal glory.

    He, is Severus Snape, the forever half-blood prince!!!

 

仔细研究了多人意见后,改成如下的文章:

 

Good afternoon, teachers. I bet we gather here because we all love English. Then u must know Harry Potter. Having finished the whole series

, now I eventually got the chance to share my feelings.

 

Frankly speaking, I feel really sorry that Mrs. Rowling killed almost all my favorite characters in the final book. First Hedwig, second mad-eye, then the others... and at last it came to the very dark star: Severus Snape.

    So long have people been announcing their opinions that Severus has got to be a good guy, a spy on Voldemort for Dumbledore, a great super hero. Well, as far as i'm concerned, although when facing his love for Lily, he appeared to be a coward, still, deep in my heart, he is a true man!

   Besides him, nobody else could have possibly born the torture of leaving Lily to James; nobody else could have possibly dared to confess his darkness to Harry; and nobody else could have possibly sacrificed his entire life to fight against the Dark Lord.

    All the above shows that Severus is the real hero!!! As the last Horcruxe was destroyed, the Dark Lord had to face his end, and this victory could not have been gained without the efforts of our great prince!!!

    Severus has gone forever, but not along with all the respects we hold for him. Together with him, Lupin, Tonks, Fred, Robby and a lot other brave warriors all passed away in order to win the final triumph. And they succeeded!!!

    With Harry seeing off little James, Lily and Albus Severus at the nine and three quarters, the legend came to its end. But we shall never forget there was once a determined and courageous man, who devoted all his life to fighting for a bright future, who kept his life-long love for Lily, who will go down to the magical history with eternal glory.

    He, is Severus Snape, the forever half-blood prince!!!

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